Posted by Adrian 207.95.235.191 using Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 5.0; MSN 2.6; Windows 98; DigExt) on April 07, 2000 at 19:47:01:
The game I'm making is called, "The Age Of Time"(may change the name). Don't ask me how I got it. Anyway I'm not the greatest story writter, so I came up with a little story for the game. It's still not done really. Well just tell me if you like it, or if you hate it, or if it's ok etc. Just say what you think of it, because your not hurting my feelings or anything. Your just helping me make this game as good as it can be!
Story(so far)
It's about two young kids in love who is soon to be married. While at home 3 intruders kidnaped the man(Jesse). They take him off to a city called "Orion". And he has to escape the city, and some how get all the way back to his wife(who is far, far away). But along the way come many roadblocks. Everyone guard and most city people know he is there and that he should be turned in if ever found wandering around. He has to engage in battles, sneaking through confidential material, and all kinds of other stuff. But the thing is he has no idea how to get back to his home. So along the way he has to find maps, take risky chances trying to find his way back. There also lots of charcters that will be in the game who he has to trust. You have to make decisons on who he will trust or not trust. There are also lots of charcters who he will meet that seem like good people, but ends up turning their backs on him.
Well theres the story so far. Tell me what you think please!! And give me suggestions, please!!
My goal for this game: I've played just about every toolkit game I could find, and the biggest problem I see is how challenging it is. With this game I hope to make it not to challenging, and not to easy.
Thanks guys! You all are pretty cool. :)